God of Poetry: A Writers’ Retreat
We break
bread, share wine,
a
get-acquainted preamble.
Evening
relaxes
sun-sweet, after
hard rain;
we gather
outdoors for your poetry reading.
From damp
adirondacks, we listen;
a
semi-circle of homage
and
blackflies. We lean in,
ignore spasms
of itch.
The lawn,
resurrected
as bog, washes
our feet.
We murmur
entreaties:
“May there
be
enough grass
plastered
on toes to
protect them
from feast.”
You stand.
A father’s
gentle voice
reading
stories to children.
You choose
four poems;
do not want
to overwhelm.
Our fingers
reach
to touch the
hem of your words.
You finish. No sound.
Our heads
bowed.
Then you
swat a blackfly
on the back
of your neck
and say,
“We have to
suffer for art.”
Laughter,
applause;
we run back
to the inn.
Alone in our
rooms,
we each pray
before sleep:
“May our
stings and spilled blood
become
the stigmata
of poets.”
I attended
an excellent retreat for writers and wrote this tongue-in-cheek poem about our
first evening together, after hearing some participants respectfully and
affectionately referring to our instructor as the “God of Poetry.” He may or may not be a god, but he was
helpful to me, taught me much about how to write and gave gentle, direct
feedback. Perhaps, they are
correct. Being god-like encompasses kindness,
teaching by example and helping people where they are. Oh yes, and having a sense of humor.
Words and
photo are copyright © 2011-2013 Carol Steel.
6 comments:
Some poets make *others* suffer for their art! This, though, sounds like a wonderful experience you had, and I felt as if i were right there with you, listening.
outdoor poetry readings are wonderful, though added insects not so good! Glad you enjoyed it!
....stopping by.....always enjoy my visits
Hi Fireblossom. Thanks for visiting. He was a great instructor. And it was a good learning experience.
Hello CGP. I enjoy poetry readings in the outdoors too. There were tons of bugs because it had rained for days and this was the first sunny break.
Hello Michelle. Thanks for stopping by.
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